7/29/05

More creative writing, how boring

~Ann came home after school to find a cow in her living room.

School had been stressful. The children hadn't behaved and the temperature was far too cold for the one room schoolhouse's stove to hold at bay. Ann trudged through the pasture between her house and the school, careful to miss the treacherous patches of ice coating the snow. She tucked her fingers under her arms; her gloves left a lot to be desired.

As Ann made her way to the gate, she groaned inwardly. Its wooden slats hung loose. "Oh you stupid beast," she mumbled, her lips stiff with cold. It was evening and to the north a storm was gathering; dark, troubled clouds, and raising wind that bode ill news. The temperature would drop far tonight. "That cow will just have to care for itself," was her decision.

She made her way up the two steps to her door, pushed inward into her small home. It smelled strange. And over the moan of the wind Ann heard something heavy fall with a crash to the floor. She screamed, jumped behind the door and carefully peered around its solid comfort into the room. By now her eyes had adjusted to the darkness.

Ann laughed with relief. Across the room, leaning against the table, was the errant cow. It had made itself at home, enjoying the comparative warmth. Who wouldn't?

6 comments:

Mrs. RF said...

I enjoy your creative writing! My type of writing would be the one sentence thing- you do well as filling in the details!

wideyed said...

...then Ann sold her cow, got online, and bought a one-way ticket to NYC, where she lived happily ever after teaching city kids about the dairy industry...
the end.

lis said...

Hey Laughter,

Let us insult your writing, okay?

very sensible of the cow

Booker said...

I don't get it. Why was this cow missing in the first place? And why was the girl worried?

Shouldn't she have informed the "Bureau of Cow Finders" or something? Or call 911?

I don't get this at all...

Laughter said...

It's because it's the middle of a train of thought and I didn't give an obvious boarding station. One has to be able to think outside of the box. :-)


hehe...

Booker said...

Outside the box. Gotcha. I'm never gonna catch that train...